For me the most memorable vocation was my trip in Crimea, because I got a lot of unforgettable impressions and I spent a good time with my friends and family. Crimea is located in Southern part of the Ukraine near the Black Sea and the Sea of Azov. I was there 4 years ago with my brother Volodya, mother, my mother’s friend Nataliya and her two children Christina and Yulya. We stayed in Gurzuf and rented an apartment near the Sea. Every day was amazing! We got sunshine, swam, played different games and relaxed. We saw many interesting places there like the Vorontsov palace, the Livadia Palace, museums of cosmonautic and navy, National Park and zoos. We were in real battle ship “Yellow Waters” and had beautiful marine excursions on boats. The weather was excellent, the nature was very beautiful, foods were delicious and we had a lot of fun! We sent three weeks there. I think this trip to Crimea was the most wonderful, and I’m planning to be there again this summer.
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6 comments:
I think your paragraph is good, you have to work little bit at the spelling words (ex. think !). Then, if I were you, I probably would write a short description of what I liked the most at those two palaces. Moreover, I have to tell you about the second sentence that sounds strange to me. It has missing the verb, I think you have to reformulate it. As an advice: "It is located on South Ukraine........", will sound better. Just check it out and see if I'm right or wrong.
In essence, it is a good piece of writing and I don't think I am perfect, just I said my thoughts.
Good work. Congratulation !
It sounds amazing! Do many people go there in the summer?
Good topic and concluding sentences.
You use some good adjectives and give many examples.
Krim is located in southern Ukraine....
We were there three weeks.
What's up Yura. It's very interesting job. Amazink vacation!........ good work!
Hi Yura!Thank you for your comments (but it was kind of ashamedly for stupid mistakes , I'll try to be more attentive next time)By the way, I already fixed them, if you'd like - chack againe (may be found something alse).
Now - about your sttory - it's excellent job and really interesting story!!! But let me give you a couple advices:
1 - I know may be it's sounds strange, but Krim on English - CRIMEA.
2 - If you talk about trip and mean that you going to back, you have to use artcle "to" , so - "...my trip to Crimea."
3 - I think these sentences sounded better, if:
- "Crimea is located in the Southern part of the Ukraine...";
- "We stayed in Gurzuf...":
- "We spant three weeks there."
Thanks guys for your advices!!! They really helped me to improve my story. Now it looks more clearly, correctly and much better 8).
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